I didn’t get to go along to the meeting today, due to being ill but I sent the updates video anyway and got some feedback –
Shot 11 – Roswell turning – nice and snappy, works well.
Shot 16 – need to see the pole extend from both ends – at present half of it is hidden behind the character (if this is the final camera framing) and it’s not clear – the motion is fine, just make sure the audience can see the pole extend from both ends.
Current walk cycle – feels a bit too jolly and not martial enough – needs to almost hold poses on key frames to make him proud – the movement will become slower as a result (won’t walk so far into the scene) but will make him look like he think’s he’s powerful – look at soldiers doing ceremonial marching.